Saturday, July 31, 2010

Weekend Change-up...

It's been a crazy week - our painting issue was finally resolved a week ago and when we knew he was coming back to finish, we sent out party invites. Yep, a housewarming is taking place today. Of course, that left us a week to finish unpacking everything, get everything that's been just lying around in its proper place, and prepare for an afternoon party.

I had planned on having pictures up today - so that you could 'come' to the party, too, but that didn't happen. So - I'll be taking pictures first thing this morning of the house so everyone can see the final outcome and I'll take pictures at the party! Then I'll post those tomorrow night - so you can all still 'come' to the party, just not right away. I'll send out e-mails to my friends and relatives back home so they can 'come', too. A Virtual Housewarming :)

Have a great Saturday everyone and I'll 'see' you soon!

Friday, July 30, 2010

Friday Fiction - Mickey Spencer, AC ~ Part 20

Yikes, running late with this! Last week's crossword answer was indeed 'shotgun' - I think all of you got it right. This week, if you want to play along, just leave your answer in the comment section and come back next week for the answer.

Parts 1 - 19 are under Mickey Spencer, AC tab at the top of the blog (actually, I'm behind in getting my instalments up there, but everything should be there by tonight - now that I've put it out there in public...). As always, I hope you enjoy!

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Part 20 ~ The last name of the man who coined: Honesty is the best policy (8 Letters)

"What do we do?"

Carol turned those big blue eyes on me and I, being the brilliant, self-assured private investigator, shrugged my shoulders. My gut reaction was to follow Ray, Lisa and the girl, but my client was not only in the car, she owned the car and was driving the car. My other options? I had none. When in doubt, go with the gut.

"Follow them, but at a distance. We don’t want Ray spotting you or your car." Or me in the car, but I kept that observation to myself. I glanced up at Gert’s house as we drove past and gave a wave as Gert still stood in her window; binoculars now trained on us.

I kept an eye on Ray’s truck as it turned left at the t-junction. Carol came to a full 3 second stop and gently manoeuvred her vehicle into post lunch traffic. With driving skills that rivalled that of the best driving instructor in the world, I stole a glance towards my car, parked a mere 200 yards from the corner. I would be in violation after another hour and the ticket would cost me dearly. But that was the least of my worries. Evan Warner lounged against my car, his arms crossed over his chest.

"Holy crap on a stick!"

"Who’s that leaning on your car?"

Not relying entirely on my sunglasses concealing my identity from my boss, I spun to face Carol and raised my hand to block my face. She glanced at me from the corner of her eye. The smile I mustered didn’t quite reach my constricting heart. "My boss."

She glanced over her shoulder. "He’s staring at us."

"Just keep driving."

"Isn’t your boss Jack?"

And where was Jack anyway? I had the feeling I should have stayed in bed that morning. "Warner and Sons. Evan and Jack are brothers, they are partnered with their father, Robert." Dick, Dick and Dick Investigations.

"Right, I remember your grandfather telling me." She kept flicking her gaze into the rearview mirror. "I think he recognized you."

Yes, I will admit to the fact that I groaned. Out loud. I may have even dropped my head into my hands. The day was moving from bad to worse at lightening speed.

"Just keep following Ray."

"He’s following us."

I spun in my seat to stare out the back window hoping that Carol was wrong.

"Black SUV, about five cars back."

"Are you sure?"

"Same one he got into after we drove past."

First, someone should tell these brainless Dicks that private investigators shouldn’t drive such obvious vehicles. Evan with his FBI wannabe vehicle and Jack with his red corvette. Talk about conspicuous. And B, where was Jack? I pulled my cellphone from my purse and dialed his number. Right through to voicemail.

"Jack? You need to call me right now! Your brother may be onto our little assignment." I clicked the phone shut and glanced over at Carol. Demerit points, she had her entire focus on me. "Watch the road, Carol."

They say silence is golden, but in that car at that moment, silence was like a ticking bomb. And even if I got through defusing it, there was another bigger, more powerful one waiting for me when we stopped the car. Ray was leading us downtown, toward his bar, which gave me roughly 15 minutes to become an explosives expert.

I swallowed. Hard. Cleared my throat. Twice. And inhaled whatever courage lingered in the air.
"Carol? I need you to keep your eye on the road. I’m not really a private investigator. I’m the accounting clerk at Warner and Sons and the business card you got from my grandfather was a poor attempt to make him proud. I should never have taken your case and I’m sorry I’ve deceived you."

That wasn’t so bad, except for the lump of shame wedged in my oesophagus.

"Well, you’re honest."

"That’s not everything. Jack and I took this case without the company’s approval. Evan doesn’t know anything about you or Ray. He thinks I’ve been sick. He must have followed me from the office this morning." I glanced over my shoulder and saw that he continued to trail us. "And Ray believes I’m a journalist working on an anniversary story about a cold case that happened down near his bar."

"Did I just compliment you on your honesty?"

Her voice had an edge to it that did not bode well for me. "Sorry."

Carol’s fingers had tightened on the steering wheel, not quite the death grip she had when she saw Ray with Lisa, but enough to make me worry again about the presence of a gun. "I don’t like being lied to, as you know, but you’re the only accounting clerk slash private investigator I’ve got, Mickey, and I’m not starting from scratch again. Ray’s heading for The Anchor. Can you get the evidence I need to confront him about his infidelity?"

Shaken by my confession and Carol’s decision to continue on, all I could do was nod my head. One bomb disarmed, one to go.

Copyright: Janet S. Corcoran 2010

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Any news this week, People of Blogland? Anyone reading anything they'd like to share? Perhaps a snippet or a problem you're having with a work in progress? What about the weekend plans - anything exciting?


Thursday, July 29, 2010

Bookified - A Meme


B.E. had this meme on her blog - she was tagged, but left it up to her readers whether or not they wanted to play. I loved the questions - and her answers were great (if you get a chance, go and have a read). Here's my version:

What have you just read?
Pamela Callow’s Damaged! Loved it – a thriller I couldn’t put down!

What are you reading now?
Anna Campbell’s My Reckless Surrender - regency romance at its finest!

Do you have any idea what you'll read when you're done with that?
I’ve got a pile a mile high on my dresser – but I think it will be The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo by Stieg Larsson.

What's the worst thing you were ever forced to read?
Honestly can't remember - probably some book for University. Yes, it's all coming back to me now - a novel about a young first nations girl for an anthropology class. The author? The professor - now that's a good way to sell books, put it on the class reading list. I couldn't finish it - horrible. So I skimmed and then picked up the novel I was interested in - a Kathleen Woodiwiss. Seems to me the exam the next day was just a tad difficult ;)

What's one book you always recommend to just about anyone?
Ooh, tough question. I have a top ten list (see my Blogger profile) and I usually recommend those books. I love figuring out the reader and then matching them up with a book. My friend Ray loves dark reads and I recommended The Lovely Bones and We Were the Mulvaneys. But I think my number 1 recommended book would be The Red Tent by Anita Diamont.

Do you read books while you eat?
Yes! And if there’s no book around, I’ll read the cereal box or the paper or the flyer or whatever!

While you bathe?
Love reading in the bath! I can spend hours in there with a good book and a glass of wine – just keep topping it up with hot water and I’m a very happy camper.

While you watch movies or tv?
Depends on how much attention the book and/or the TV-movie needs. I have been known to watch TV and read at the same time!

While you're on the computer?
My WIP or a critique read – yes – a regular book at the same time as computer – no.

When you were little kid other children tease you about your reading habits?
"Where’s Janet?" "Nose in a book probably!" Not so much teased, but definitely attention drawn to the fact I was always reading.

What's the last thing you stayed up half the night reading because it was so good you couldn't put it down?
Pamela Callow’s Damaged.

Have any books made you cry?Yes – too many to mention. If a book draws me in, the characters are believable and the emotions authentic, I will cry and laugh and cheer on the hero or heroine. The ‘nose in a book’ observation – yep, and my heart and soul!

So, People of Blogland, if you want to use this meme on your blog, feel free (and like B.E. I'll ask that you let me know so I can come and have a gander at your answers). Or if you want to answer one or all of the questions in the comment section, I'd love to hear about your reading habits. Books - you gotta love them :)


Wednesday, July 28, 2010

Inspiration - Imagine...

I love this song - John Lennon's "Imagine"! Now, use that as a backdrop to some fantastic inspirational quotes and you have Inspiration Wednesday!







You may say I'm a dreamerBut I'm not the only one

Was there a particular quote in the bunch that spoke to you today, People of Blogland? Any John Lennon fans in the crowd?

Tuesday, July 27, 2010

My Art Buy...

So the deal on the weekend was buying art - almost right from the artist's hand. Artists signed up to paint in the event Paint Sea on Site and positioned themselves around Lunenburg, brush in hand. Then, when the artist was finished, they brought the work to the community center for the public to purchase. There were two ways to do this - "Take Away" and Silent Auction.

The artwork was displayed on giant pegboards and next to each piece there was a paper with the artist's name, the name of the piece, the "Take Away" price and a starting bid. Naturally, the "Take Away" price was much more than the starting bid! If you found a piece you just had to have, you could take it away at that "Take Away" price. No bidding, no worrying that you wouldn't get the piece you want - done. Or you could bid on it (everyone who registered got a number) and hope that 5 hours later, you would be the winner!

It was very exciting! To see all the paintings side by side gave me a very good indication of what I liked and what I liked, but wouldn't hang in my house. And to people watch - wow, the perfect place. Everyone milled about, talking about the paintings, discussing their bids, chatting with friends and neighbors! I really got caught up in the excitement and even though I didn't think I would be staying until the end, I couldn't NOT stay!

The "Take Away" ended at 3:30! And the silent auction ended at 4:30. So those that just couldn't risk not having the winning bid on a piece they loved, snatched it up before 3:30. Then the bidding became fast and furious, with the announcer counting down. At the 5 minute mark, everyone was frantically bidding. At the 30 second mark - geesh, stand back, you might get mowed down as people rushed to get the final bid in before time was called. Exciting!

Two things happened to me, the newbie at the event. When we arrived in Lunenburg, we stopped off on the golf course road - this is the road that looks over the harbor and has the postcard picture view. Two painters were set up there - one of them my friend Anna knew because she had bought one of her paintings two years ago. I've admired that painting everytime I go into Anna's house! And the artist was creating another 'woven' picture (that's what I call it). In the exact colors of my interior house paint! She informed us that she'd have the painting at the community center around 1:00. Off we went.
When the painting came in, I dithered whether or not I was going to take it away. The price was well within my budget - and I really liked it. But I didn't want to limit myself - I had a whole day left and what if another painting came in that I liked better? Good thing my friend Anna is as astute as she is. She bought the painting at the take away price - insisting that she would find a home for it if I didn't want it, but not wanting it to be snapped up by anyone else. I brought the painting home and it was perfect for my entrance - I promptly paid Anna and here is my first piece of Nova Scotian art (acrylic by Bronwyn Conrad - sorry, no website that I could find):








Second thing - an artist brought in a painting around 2:30 and I fell in love with it. A corner of a house, a house the same color as ours, surrounded by beautiful flowers and a flower box at the window. It was vibrant and the blue of the house with the white flowers just did something for me. I couldn't afford the take away, but I put a bid in one it. That lasted about half an hour - then someone came along, took one look and snapped it off the board for the take away price. ARGH! Oh, well - that was part of the excitement of the event!

So, People of Blogland, have you ever been to a silent auction? Does the bidding and anticipation make you crazy? And I have to ask - watercolors, oils or acrylics? Abstract or realism?


*Click on pictures to enlarge*

Monday, July 26, 2010

Time...

Time, I have no time!
The clock ticks - seconds, minutes, hours,
Every day, all day.
Yet I have no time.
Work and exercise,
Hobbies and housework!
I need to cook - I need to eat.
Play with the dog,
Sleep!


Four more hours,
No, make it 6!
Those extra seconds, minutes, hours,
Will give me time!

TO PLAY!!

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I seem to be running around trying to play catch up, People of Blogland. There's always something to be done, somewhere to go, someone to call - and I end my days exhausted. Anyone else out there needing just a couple more hours in the day to accomplish everything on the "To Do" list? Maybe I'm not using my time wisely? I feel like I am, but then I end up short at the end of the day. Tips and suggestions would be appreciated! And for heaven's sake, don't suggest getting up earlier in the morning (see last week's post on Fighting the Clock - hmm, seems I'm fixated on time these days).



Sunday, July 25, 2010

Sunday Salute - Artists


From water colors to oils, landscapes to abstract, art certainly makes my world a little brighter and a little more colorful. As you know, I went to Paint Sea on Site yesterday - an event like nothing I've ever been to before (more about it later in the week - with a photo of the art I bought). I loved looking at the pictures, some still wet - and marveled at the different medium and styles. Beautiful. I'm not one to frequent art galleries - but I think that may have to change.

It seems that man must decorate by art. The cave dwellers had their art, not hung on the wall, but etched right into it! And generations later, we're still displaying works of art by talented people. Thank goodness for artists! What a dull and boring place this would be without the color and vibrancy they bring to the world, to our homes!

Anyone out there art gallery fanatics? Do you stop to admire the art on your walls, People of Blogland? Any artists in the crowd?

Saturday, July 24, 2010

Antiques and Art...

Another Saturday, another adventure! Two items on the agenda today - first an auction just around the corner from me (Conquerall Bank Fire Hall). You already know how much I love old things, so an estate auction is perfect. Viewing begins at 9:30 - and I'll be there to drift from table to table, item to item, marveling at its age and wondering about its story! I probably won't stay and bid on anything - the last one I attended had a good turn out of people with clipboards, pens and obviously the knowledge of what was good and what wasn't. I didn't want to have to go up against any of those antique dealers.

Auctions bring out an array of emotions in me. I've attended some where I had to leave, the sadness of witnessing a person's life bundled up and tagged then sold to the highest bidder breaking my heart. Our neighbors in Saskatchewan, an elderly couple who were just the nicest people, became too old to care for their house. Mary passed away before the house was sold and Albert ended up in a home - the kids hired an auctioneer and all of their possessions were displayed on their lawn for all to see and comment on. Mary's homemade quilts, Albert's tools - most sold well under market price. I started off sitting on my deck to watch and ended up in the house crying! And then took that emotion and wrote a short story - I'll post it next week.

At least these auctions are in a firehall and I don't know the owners of the items, nor do I have to see family members watching as their parents' lives are haggled over. But I still get emotional.

Then - we're off to Lunenburg for Paint Sea on Site. I've included the link - there's a great slideshow (which you need to stop if you want to read the information). The gist of the event is artists painting in various spots around Lunenburg and the public gets a chance at buying the work they've seen come to life. I'm very excited. I love art - and like writers and songwriters, I love to 'inspect' their process. I also have a main character, Gillian, who is a painter! Again, I don't think I'll buy anything, but I can't wait to witness the creative process.

So, People of Blogland, do you like auctions? Are you into antiques? What about art - paintings (realistic or abstract, oil or water) or sculptures? What's on your Saturday agenda?


Friday, July 23, 2010

Friday Fiction - Mickey Spencer, AC ~ Part 19

Welcome back to Mickey Spencer, AC! Mickey's first case as a Private Investigator isn't going according to plan. Her client has just shown up on a stakeout and the man in question isn't acting like a lowdown, cheating sleezeball. Mickey's beginning to think that accounting clerk isn't such a bad job after all!

The answer to last week's clue was indeed 'disaster'. Check back next week for the answer to this week's clue. And for previous instalments, click on the Mickey Spencer, AC tab at the top of this blog - it's all there in one place for easy reading.

Enjoy :)

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Part 19 ~ Occupying the Passenger Seat – Riding _______ (7 Letters)

I stared out the window, unwilling to blink in case I missed something of importance. Like Ray and Lisa emerging hand in hand and Carol jumping from her car, screaming Ray’s name at the top of her lungs, waving a loaded gun in the air. It all played out in slow motion in my mind and I didn’t like the ending one bit.

"I’ll be back." I grabbed my purse and sprinted from the room, yelling over my shoulder, "Stay inside, Gert."

With my own homage to Jackie O, I slipped on my sunglasses and tried to look casual while run-walking down the driveway and over to Carol’s car. The door was locked and I had to tap on the window and peer through the glass before the click issued an invitation to enter. I slid into the passenger side and pulled off my shades. "Start the car and back up at least a half a block."

Carol opened her mouth.

"No!" I pointed at the steering column. "Start it, move it and then we’ll talk."

She did as I asked. I had no idea I could be so forceful. I needed to remember this the next time I went in to ask for a raise: dynamic, powerful, effective versus stuttering, wimpy, and unassertive. The Dicks wouldn’t know what hit them.

"We should be fine here." I waited for her to put it in gear and switch off the engine before I went for the proverbial throat. "What the hell are you doing? Did you follow me here?"

At least she looked ashamed when she removed her sunglasses and aimed those big blue eyes my way. They were red-rimmed and watery. "I’m sorry, Mickey. Your grandfather told me that you had a break in the case and were about to catch Ray in a compromising situation."

Gramps was due some of my new kick-ass attitude when I had the time. Right now, I was up to my eyeballs in Private Eye Hell. "You said before in our interview that Ray had been cheating on you before. I need to know what happened. Did you hire a private detective at that time?"

"Yes."

"Did you follow him?"

"Yes."

Like a great crossword puzzle with most of the letters filled in, I didn’t need to know the word to finish the puzzle. "And the reason there was no proof is because the private investigator didn’t finish the job. You confronted Ray."

"Yes."

The door to The Home opened and I spotted Ray stepping over the threshold. "Sunglasses on, Carol. Let’s hope he’s so invested in either the woman he’s with or the reason he’s here that he doesn’t notice your car." I scrunched down in the passenger seat and aimed my camera.

Ray stopped on the front walkway, suitcase in hand, and turned back to the door. A dark haired young woman, tall and gangly in a teenage way, hands dug deep into jean pockets, shoulders slumped against the injustices of the world, stepped out into the sunshine. She wore the ball cap Ray had worn upon his arrival.

"Do you know her?"

"No. I’ve never seen her before."

Lisa backed out of the door, obviously talking to whoever was in the vestibule of the building. She closed the door and turned eliciting a gasp from Carol.

"You know her?"

Carol gripped the steering wheel, her knuckles whitening from the pressure. I took that as a yes. She sat forward and I remembered Gert’s question.

"Carol, you don’t own a gun, do you?"

She remained fixated on the scene playing out before us. Lisa joining Ray and the young girl on the sidewalk, a discussion between the adults, and, finally, all three moving toward the vehicles.

I snapped pictures while keeping an eye on Carol. She hadn’t denied owning a gun, but with the slow strangulation of the steering wheel I assumed she didn’t or Ray would be dead by now.

Everyone piled into Ray’s truck with the suitcase stowed in the bed. My only prayer, besides Carol not pulling a Glock from under the car seat, was that Ray would pull a U-turn in front of Gert’s house. I didn’t need him spotting Carol’s car, Carol or me since I had a long way to go before this case sorted itself out.

Copyright: Janet S. Corcoran 2010

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How's the week going for you, People of Blogland? Big question - is everyone still interested in following Mickey? I can wrap it up relatively soon or I can continue to build and layer. I certainly don't want to bore you all to death! As always, feel free to use the comment section for news, snippets, or tell us what you're reading.


Thursday, July 22, 2010

An Eye-Opening Article...

For a person supposed to be off the Internet on Wednesdays, I was very busy on the Internet! Of course, I was knee deep in the Day Job - which requires me to be online so I can remote into my computer at the office in Saskatchewan (technology is amazing). My MSN stays on because that's a huge communication vehicle for our work, although you wouldn't know that with the amount of time I spend on the phone! And with MSN, my hotmail beeps whenever I get an e-mail - so I have to check it out. On my 10 minute lunch break (less break means faster finish at the end of the day and I'm all about punching that time clock OUT), I check my gmail account. The Outlook account (work) is on while I am working, so on the 10 minute break I also switch over to my personal Outlook account and see what's happening there...

I HAVE TOO MANY E-MAIL ACCOUNTS!

Anyway - interesting links came in through the various accounts. One was from my RWAC group on Yahoo (thank goodness I have everything from there directed into my gmail or I would never get time to log in and catch up). Victoria LeBlanc sent this link for us all to read - honestly, it stole the breath from my lungs because this is what I've been dealing with everyday! Finally, someone has given it a name: "Active Non-Accomplishment". Here's the link - and this applies to anyone who's had a goal and has fallen short only to face that reality!

What Took You So Long - The Quiet Hell of Ten Years of Novel Writing by Susanna Daniel http://www.slate.com/id/2260395/

The first two paragraphs! I read them and re-read them, and then re-read them again. I even phoned a friend and read them to here. Powerful! Eye-opening! But then I got to the 9th paragraph - where a friend of the writer tells her that writers stop writing "One day at a time"! OMG!

OMG!

I hope you take the time to read the article - no matter what your ambition in life is - and then come back and comment here! I'd love to hear your take on what the writer is saying - the message she shares (of course, her story ends happily and maybe that's what I should be focused on). And tell me, People of Blogland, do you suffer "Active Non-Accomplishment"?


Wednesday, July 21, 2010

Inspiration - Muse Contributes...

Hello everyone - I'm Muse, some of you already know me, others haven't had the pleasure. There was a discussion on Erika's blog yesterday about abandoning your muse and Janet, misguided as she is, commented on the fact that I have gone missing. Well, I haven't. I am here and have been here waiting and waiting and waiting for her to get her act together and get back to the thing that brings her great joy and pride. No use me jumping up and down, shouting in her ear, when she is obvious immune to me and isn't listening. I refuse to holler for attention, then be ignored six seconds after the last word tipples over my lips. Back in the day, I used to - but I've matured. And I can wait - she'll come around. She has to, writing's in her blood.

So, while we wait for Janet to accept the fact that she must write and one day 'publication' will be an everyday word in her vocabulary, I'm contributing the inspirational quotes today. I hope at least one of them resonates with you and your muse - and that you never, ever deny yourself that which gives you the most pleasure (no matter how little time you have to contribute to that venture).

Spend time every day listening to what your muse is trying to tell you. ~ Saint Bartholomew

I would especially like to recourt the Muse of poetry, who ran off with the mailman four years ago, and drops me only a scribbled postcard from time to time. ~ John Updike

The man who arrives at the doors of artistic creation with none of the madness of the Muses, would be convinced that technical ability alone was enough to make an artist . . . what that man creates by means of reason will pale before the art of inspired beings. ~ Plato

Biting my truant pen, beating myself for spite: 'Fool!' said my Muse to me, 'look in thy heart and write. ~ Philip Sidney

There you have it - my version of Inspiration Wednesday. Let me know which one spoke to you today and please, I'd love to meet your muses - go ahead and introduce them in the comment section.

**I have no way of creating a signature - I am a muse, not a signatory!

Tuesday, July 20, 2010

Attention Pet Owners...

My good friend Jane sent this to me over the weekend and I just loved it! Then, over on B.E.'s blog, she was talking about rescuing a cat who had been mistreated - she's now taken the cat in after having it to the vet for a check-up and healing (you're a good woman, B.E.) - I knew I had to post this.

I know a lot of my friends who visit here are pet companions, and all of you have embraced Taz, so I know you're animal lovers. I've very rarely been without a dog in my entire life - a couple of years while going to university, and when I taught in the Arctic. Other that that, there's been a dog in my house (Trixie, Mickey, Buffy, Murphy, Bridie, M.C. and Taz) not to mention the dogs my older brother has had (and I spent a lot of time at my older brother's house in my teenage years - he's 9 years older than I am), and the cat I talked my Mom and Dad into (I love cats), and the budgie bird. I had a salamander for a brief time when my name was drawn to take the thing home for summer keeping - I had to take him back as I didn't have permission and my mom drew the line at reptiles. And I've had fish - although nice, I'd rather have something furry or feathery!

If I could, I'd have a couple of dogs and a couple of cats roaming around the house. But The Husband isn't as big of an animal lover as I am, so we have Taz. BTW, that's Taz as a puppy - too cute.

Anyway - The Pet's Ten Commandments (I couldn't find anything on line for original source, but whoever wrote this - thank you):

1. My life is likely to last 10-15 years. Any separation from you is likely to be painful.
2. Give me time to understand what you want of me
3. Place your trust in me. It is crucial for my well-being.
4. Don't be angry with me for long and don't lock me up as punishment. You have your work, your friends, your entertainment, but I have only you.
5. Talk to me. Even if I don't understand your words, I do understand your voice when speaking to me.
6. Be aware that however you treat me, I will never forget it.
7. Before you hit me, before you strike me, remember that I could hurt you, and yet, I choose not to bite you.
8. Before you scold me for being lazy or uncooperative, ask yourself if something might be bothering me. Perhaps I'm not getting the right food, I have been in the sun too long, or my heart might be getting old or weak.
9. Please take care of me when I grow old. You too, will grow old.
10 On the ultimate difficult journey, go with me please. Never say you can't bear to watch. Don't make me face this alone. Everything is easier for me if you are there, because I love you so.
~Take a moment today to thank God for your pets. Enjoy and take good care of them. Life would be a much duller, less joyful experience without God's critters.
~We do not have to wait for Heaven, to be surrounded by hope, love, and joyfulness. It is here on earth and has four legs!

Oh, see, I still well up when I read this!

Do you have a pet, People of Blogland? I'd love to hear about them and how much they enrich your life - feel free to use the comment section to introduce us to your four-legged friend (or two, if you have a bird, or fins if you have a fish). I'm going to give Taz a belly rub :)


Monday, July 19, 2010

Fighting the Clock...

Is it possible to change you inner clock? I am a night owl by nature. I love staying up into the wee hours of the morning - and if I'm not in bed by 10, 11 at the latest, my body and my brain waken up and I find it very hard to go to sleep. 6 am alarm clocks? Blech! I find 9 is the perfect time to get up - and if I had my way, my life would center around those times. But life isn't perfect and here's what fights against my natural sleep patterns:

  • My husband is a morning person.
  • Taz is a morning dog.
  • This running thing has to happen before it gets too hot - and these days it's too hot and humid even if I am out the door at 7:30.
  • My Dad's constant voice in my head convincing me that I miss out on the most productive hours of the day.
  • Other people's work schedules (if I choose to work on my schedule, social activities of those who work 'normal' hours will interfere - and I believe I am in the minority).

For years I have tried to change my inner clock. Of course, teaching and working at a regular office forced me to set alarm clocks and get out the door before my body had fully awoken. Now that I work from home, I still try and keep 'normal' hours - and have thought about getting up earlier. My rationale is that I will be up, exercised and at the Day Job earlier; therefore, I will be finished earlier. But no matter how I try to reset that clock, it still doesn't work! I can not drag my butt from bed at that hour.

So, my question to you, People of Blogland, is can a person reset their clock? Have you done it? Are you a morning person or a night owl? Should I give up trying to change and work with that circadian rhythm - do you think I'd get more done?


Sunday, July 18, 2010

Sunday Salute - Volunteers...


What a great time yesterday - first the Fireman's Breakfast and then the Fort Point Museum House Tour. On this Sunday, I'd like to thank all the volunteers who made both events possible. And what a slew of volunteers were needed. The breakfast - from the preparation of the food to the serving to the lady at the table taking tickets and those in the kitchen washing dishes for the next bunch of hungry people coming in. The house tour - we were greeted at every house as soon as we walked in the door and volunteers were scattered throughout the house in case we had any questions, and let's not forget those that manned the museum's lunchroom where during the day participants could wander in for light refreshments and tea or coffee. Both events were made even better because of those friendly and helpful volunteers.

I have been a volunteer at various times during my life and have found such rich reward in the service. Those that volunteer on regular basis at schools or senior's homes make the lives of those that work and 'live' there that much easier. As a teacher, I cherised my volunteers. And as a volunteer at a senior's home years ago, I loved my contact with the older generation and loved hearing their stories.

Where would we be without volunteers? Certainly not having a wonderful breakfast or going on house tours. If you make volunteering a part of your life, either big or small, I salute you. And I thank all those who give up their personal time to help their community and fellow man :)

Have you ever volunteered for anything, People of Blogland? Do you have some volunteers you'd like to thank today - feel free to use the comment section to do so? Have a great Sunday!

Saturday, July 17, 2010

Social Saturday...

It's going to be a busy one here on Nova Scotia's South Shore.

We're starting our day at the Riverport (link to the village's website) Firehall for the monthly breakfast. This is the only place where we've encountered this event - and not every firehall holds a monthly breakfast, but the majority do. Fundraising, social gathering, yummy breakfast cooked for you - it's a win/win if you ask me. For $6 we get bacon, sausage, eggs (either scambled or over easy), pancakes, baked beans, coffee, and juice. Last time, I had one scoop of scrambled eggs and I'm pretty sure there was a good 4 eggs in that one scoop. You go in, pay your money, sit at the long communal tables and check off on a piece of paper what you want (yes, you can have everything I listed, if you want). One of the volunteers takes the paper and brings you your breakfast in less time that it would take me to get out the eggs, find the fry pan, and complain about having to cook breakfast!

The best thing, besides helping the firehall with fundraising (volunteer fire department) and the fabulous meal is getting to see your neighbors and friends! I think the idea is brilliant - and even though we don't live on that side of the river any more, we'll still participate in the breakfasts. Our volunteer fire department on this side of the river doesn't do breakfasts - but they do suppers and I think we'll have to go to the next one. Honestly, they don't do this out west - unless I've just been living in the wrong towns!

Next up on Social Saturday is another fundraiser - The Fort Point Museum's Biannual House Tour. Our ticket gets us into 6 homes in close proximity to the museum (the farthest being in Petite Rivier). I love looking at homes - and decorated, renovated, showhomes, even better! I plan on doing a lot of oohing and ahhing. And maybe just a few notetaking for ideas for my own home! The house I'm most looking forward to is a renovated school house. Built in 1906, it's now a private home. Of course, I'm assuming all the homes will be spectacular and I'm looking forward to a fabulous day.

The museum is also offering refreshments throughout the day - so we'll probably wander back there for something to snack on before ending our tour. Of course, me in a museum might prove disastrous for the others traveling with me (I'm the driver for the excursion). The museum sits on a jut of land first inhabited by the French and considered "The First Capital of New France" in 1632. I've provided a link to the museum's website - if you're at all interested, I highly recommend reading the short blurb under the 'Museum' tab. History, museums, the stories of long gone generations fascinate me - and I play a lot of 'what if' games when I'm surrounded by ghosts of the past!

That's all that's planned - but around here, you just never know. We're busy - definitely busy! I hope your Saturday is great, whatever you decide to do :)

Tell me, People of Blogland, do you have community breakfasts where you live? If you do have these type of fundraising events, do you make it a point of going? Would you open your house to strangers? Anyone out there a historical fanatic like me?


Friday, July 16, 2010

Friday Fiction - Mickey Spencer, AC ~ Part 18

That time again. For those wishing to catch up, the previous instalments have their own page under the Mickey Spencer, AC tab at the top of the blog. Those who are playing along with the crossword clues, last week's answer was "Lies" - I think all of you got it right :)

As always, I hope you enjoy. I know I had fun writing this instalment!

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Part 18 ~ A Tornado or Hurricane or Tsunami (8 Letters) ~

Of course, I immediately left the office and all the paperwork piled high on my desk. Mystery woman had a name, Lisa Johnson. According to Gert, she was at the Home and I planned on tailing her for the rest of the day, if I wasn’t too late getting over to Glenham. My guts churned, and not just from the late night snack of high calories and too many fat grams. Even if she wasn’t Ray’s girlfriend, whom I believed wholeheartedly she wasn’t, there was a connection between the two of them and I was determined to uncover it.

I parked at the end of the street, deciding to walk in again, and took a long look in both directions. Goosebumps pebbled my skin causing the hair on my arms to stand at attention. The beautiful spring weather could not be blamed. I felt watched.

No. I felt stalked.

I had blamed the unease this morning on lack of sleep and worry over the solving the case, but now I wondered if I had been followed bright and early from my apartment.

Jack! He better not be trailing me! I flung my tote over my shoulders and lifted my chin. I couldn’t resist sticking out my tongue. To a passer-by, I was simply licking my lips. To Jack, hopefully he’d get the message.

Just as Gert said, Lisa Johnson’s car was parked at the curb outside the mental institute. I crossed over to the other side and up Gert’s sidewalk. I would watch from there. Gert opened the door before I had a chance to knock.

"She took in a suitcase."

Gert led me to the window where she parked herself next to me and lifted binoculars that were dangling around her neck. I fished in my tote for my camera and lifted it to my eye to get a better view. Our legs hadn’t even got a chance to get numb when a truck rumbled down the road.

Big. Red. Two-door!

"Is that the two-timing son of a bi – "

"Gert!"

"Well, is it?"

Yep, Ray Dixon, who should have been still hunkered down in his house according to Carol’s timetable, parked his truck haphazardly behind Ms. Johnson’s and jumped from the cab. And after a couple of days of following him and hanging out at his bar, he wasn’t dressed for work. Low slung jeans, sandals, t-shirt advertising America’s Beer, ball cap pulled low on his forehead.

"He looks like he doesn’t want to be recognized."

I had to agree with her especially with the surreptitious glance up and down the street and the hustle to get into The Home.

"Have you seen him around here before, Gert?"

"I couldn’t get a good look at him, but I don’t remember the truck." She swung her binoculars to her right and held them steady in one hand while she pointed. "I do, however, recognize that car."

A blue sedan drove by at the speed of a non-racing turtle giving me plenty of time to identify Carol behind the wheel. Through the lens of my camera I could see she had donned a wide-brimmed straw hat and glasses Jackie O would covet. The disguise hid her face, but someone should have told her about not driving the everyday car to a stakeout.

"Great!"

"Who are you calling?"

"Just a man with regards to his mouth." I waited for Gramps to pick up and watched Carol head down the street, pull a 7 point turn, and then park in the shade of an giant oak tree exactly one house down from Gert’s.

"Morning, Honey. How’s the case?"

"What exactly did you tell Carol?"

"Oh." Silence followed.

"Gramps?"

"The girls are here to take me down to the rec room, Mickey. Don’t want to be late for that first Bingo game." This time a click proceeded the silence.

"The man doesn’t even like Bingo."

Gert lowered the binoculars. "What’s that, Mickey?"

"Nothing."

"Is that your client? Oh, my this is going to get interesting." Gert hoisted the binoculars and swung them around to stare at Carol.

Interesting? Well that was a good way to describe something I would call a complete mess. No wonder I had the feeling I was being followed. And did she have to park directly across the street? Ray would recognize the vehicle as soon as he emerged.

"Do you think she’s packing?"

Seconds passed before I realized what Gert implied. Carol with a gun? Wow, could the day get any better?

~Copyright: Janet S. Corcoran

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So, tell me what's happening in your world, People of Blogland? How's the writing going? What are you reading? Share a snippet or perhaps a great line in the book you're reading - I love great lines!


Thursday, July 15, 2010

Follow the Train of Thought - I Dare You..

Ha - I started this post right before So You Think You Can Dance came on - and typed a whopping one sentence and then erased it. Then, for two hours of fabulous dancing where my toes were tapping and I was either agreeing or disagreeing with the judges' comments, I was trying to decide what to blog about. I came back and there, in my edit posts, was the draft I had started. Blank!

Yep, sums up what I have to say today.

Honestly, I have nothing. Sure, I could talk about the rain we had. At one point it poured - ran down the driveway in little rivers (which I think the dictionary calls 'creeks'). And we have a low spot in the backyard where the water pools - I could go wading if I weren't concerned with sharing the shallows with the frogs.

We have frogs. Great for keeping the bugs down, not so great at 5 in the morning when Taz decides she desperately needs out for a pee and then forgets that she was desparate because there's a frog on the back patio and it just hopped when she walked past, frightening her and then making her curious. She followed the poor frog, and sniffed it - jumping almost as high as the frog when it hopped away. Then the chase was on - up and into the bush. And me, in my pajamas, barefeet and no glasses (I am blind without my glasses) joining the pursuit and yelling at her to get back here. Good thing we don't have any neighbors close by!!

I could also discuss book club because that was on the agenda yesterday. It was mystery month and I read a couple that I just loved. I've decided that I love mystery/suspense. And when I conceive a story, there's always some element of mystery to be solved. Had a lovely time up at Caribou Lake - ate the most wonderful trifle and sipped a glass of sherry. And talked books - all kinds of books! Most afternoons should be spent eating trifle, sipping sherry and talking books!

Then there's SYTYCD (still cheering for Kent - cutie pie). Or the Day Job - and the countless hours spent on spreadsheets. I phoned my mom, like I do every Wednesday and Sunday. I made supper - yummy tacos. And listened to the voices in my head - yes, they're back. I believe writer's are the only people who can hear voices in their heads and not be committed (ok, and those people who don't tell anyone they hear voices in their heads). I think this is a good thing that the voices are back - maybe now I can get on with the writing - it's time!

Look at that - nothing to say and I've filled a page. Did you follow the train - amazing what where free writing will take you? What's up with you, People of Blogland? Are you watching SYTYCD and if so, who are you cheering for? Do you like trifle? Do you have frogs in your back yard? What did you have for supper?



Wednesday, July 14, 2010

Inspiration - Decision Making...

Last Wednesday we had a lively discussion about making decisions after a bevy of quotes on kick starting ourselves into action. That prompted this week's quote-fest. Decision making - the good, the bad and the ugly!

If you put off everything till you're sure of it, you'll get nothing done. ~ Norman Vincent Peale (um, been there, done that)

Indecision is debilitating; it feeds upon itself; it is, one might almost say, habit-forming. Not only that, but it is contagious; it transmits itself to others. ~ H. A. Hopf (so very, very true)

Using the power of decision gives you the capacity to get past any excuse to change any and every part of your life in an instant. ~ Anthony Robbins (it is powerful, isn't it?)

One thing is sure. We have to do something. We have to do the best we know how at the moment...; If it doesn't turn out right, we can modify it as we go along. ~ Franklin D. Roosevelt

I really like the last one. Make a decision. Then re-evaluate as the work gets done - at least it's progress, moving forward!

Which quote spoke to you today, People of Blogland? Are you good at making decisions?


Tuesday, July 13, 2010

Chillaxin' - Taz Style...

With the hot summer sun and high humidity, energy levels have plummeted. And so has the enthusiasm to get anything other than the necessities (read Day Job) accomplished. I love the heat - growing up on the prairies, summer's were usualy hot, hot, hot. But not wet! I had no idea the humity would make one so lethargic.

The inside house temperature is similar to the outside temperature - and if I'm going to sit anywhere and sip a cold one while reading, then I'm going to sit outside. Taz, of course, comes out with me - she might miss something if she stayed indoors. And it's no ordinary patch of grass she pulls up! No, Taz has her standards and they include lawn chairs.

This was my chair, until I got up to go inside for just a minute! Whatever you do, if you visit - call dibs on your lawn chair :)





The Canada Chair is her favorite - much roomier and the arms are perfectly positioned for her head (as seen in the first picture)!

So, tell me People of Blogland, how do you stay cool in the midst of a heatwave? How's the weather where you are - would you like some heat and humidity? How many of you have actually used the word "Chillaxin'"? I never thought I would and here it is - on a blogpost title! Sick (ooh, there's another one :)

Monday, July 12, 2010

Three Months and Counting...

This past Saturday marked the 3 month mark for the 1/2 marathon I plan on running! Yep, on Saturday as I was out for my long run (which isn't very long right now), I realized that in exactly three months I would be running my first ever race. Scary considering the race is 21K (13 miles) and I'm only up to 8! Three months is not that long in the grand scheme of things - and at the pace I'm going (I can do roughly 7K in an hour), I'm going to be running for 3 hours...

And that leads me to hyperventilate because on Saturday, my long run day, I ran for 30 minutes doing 2 minute run, 1 minute walk - then I turned around and ran 10 minutes, walked 1, ran 10, walked 1, and ended with a 5 min run. That's a total of 45 minutes running time and I was exhausted. Beat. Couldn't have run another minute if my life depended on it. I've got a long way (both in terms of distance and time) to go!!

But I will do it. I've crossed a line! Three weeks ago if the weather had been bad (Saturday was drizzle and humidity was painfully high), I would have shrugged my shoulders and poured myself another cup of coffee. But something has clicked in the last few weeks - I'm looking forward to my runs (not in the WOO HOO, jumping for joy, running is the best thing ever kind of way). I don't think I could forgive myself if I didn't get out there on my training days. I want to do it now - that line between 'eh' and 'yes' has been crossed!

Bonus to all this - my legs are looking toned. Well, from the knees down, but I'm sure in three months the upper part of the leg will also be more muscular. I've dropped 7 pounds. And I feel so much better - more optimistic. Happier. On Saturday, when I returned somewhat wet from drizzle and sweat, breath labored, extremely hot, I was ecstatic. My first "Runner's High"! I love that feeling - and really someone should bottle it and sell it!

So even though I'm worried about the distance and the time, I'm very proud of my accomplishments to date. I will do it - after all, I've put it out here into the Blogosphere - and I'll report in every now and then on my progress! If you want to see where I'll be running, click here to go to the Valley Harvest Marathon (sponsored by Tim Horton's - there better be donuts at that finish line!). The really cool thing is that the race is on Oct. 10, 2010 - 10-10-10 :)

Well, People of Blogland, any runners out there (I know Ann(bunnygirl) is)? Has anyone put her mind to something and found there was a line that seemed to move you from 'eh' to 'yes' somewhere along your journey? I need to relate this running metaphor with my writing - perhaps that will be my weeking pondering and I'll report back if I come up with any 'aha' moments.


Sunday, July 11, 2010

Sunday Salute - Gardeners...

Everyone knows that I am not a gardener - but I love gardens! I want to say Thank You to all those people who spend hours in their gardens making it living art for those of us who drive, walk or run by!

My running route (long) takes me along the highway leading down the river toward LaHave. Almost every house I pass has a garden where purples and yellows, oranges, pinks and whites sway in the breeze - all showcased against varying shades of green. The view is breathtaking! And sometimes, if the wind is right, the scent is intoxicating.

In my own neglected garden, previous owners planted hostas. They are in flower right now, with delicate purple flowers growing along the tall stem. Since this is the only flower I have in my yard - seriously, I had no idea I was so flowerless until I went looking - I cut some and placed them in a vase for last night's dinner with friends. They were beautiful and I thank the gardener who took the time to plant them.

I salute all those who garden - it may bring you pleasure to dig in the dirt, but it brings me pleasure as well! I appreciate all you hard work in making the world a little more colorful :)

So, People of Blogland, do you take time to 'view' the flowers? Are gardens something you look at when out for a walk or a drive?




Saturday, July 10, 2010

To Do - Clean House...

I would like to know who invented housework! Really - who looked around her cave one day and decided that the dirt should be swept up off the dirt floor and the dust whisked away from the rock in the corner? If anyone out there is Blogland knows, please inform me - I have a bone to pick with that individual who obviously had too much time on her hands that she started to clean her house!

Can you guess what's on my agenda today? At least if I were a cave dweller, I wouldn't need to clean the bathrooms! Back in medieval times, the washroom or 'garderobe' was simply a chute built into the castle wall. And a man, called a gong farmer, had the odious task of cleaning the walls of said chute! A man! When did it change over to a woman?

And in this day and age of technology and innovation how come no one has come up with a brilliant, gigantic dust sucker that would be installed in the utility room and with a flip of the switch suck up all dust bunnies, dirt, and copious amounts of furballs that Taz leaves hanging around? I'd pay for that! Of course, I'd still have to clean the bathroom, but there would be one less job to tackle on housecleaning day.

What's your least favorite housecleaning task, People of Blogland? Would you buy a "Dust and Dirt Sucker" if it were available? And because I love to Google and I seem to be discussing bathrooms today (somedays I have no idea where my mind will lead me), I have this link to "The Facilities in Space". I ended up reading it all - fascinating, but no where does it say who has to clean the toilet up there. Probably a woman!


Friday, July 9, 2010

Friday Fiction - Mickey Spencer, AC ~ Part 17

And I'm back. Thank you all for your understanding last week - and your support for Mickey Spencer (glad to know everyone's enjoying our sleuth's first private investigating adventure). For a little catch-up and an exercise in blurb/synopsis/query type writing - here's my version of "Last time, on Mickey Spencer, AC" - this also gives the new readers the Reader's Digest version so you don't have to read all 16 parts previous to this one (but you can - here).

When the co-owner, Jack Warner, discovers I’ve been passing out business cards claiming to be a private investigator instead of an accounting clerk at Warner and Sons Investigations, he blackmails me into cooking his expense account. But he’s not the only one capable of blackmail. If I’m going to help keep his sorry butt from getting fired by his own brother and father then he’s going to let me assist with a case of infidelity.
Ray Dixon is suspected of cheating on his fiance, Carol, who, coincidentally, works at the senior’s home where my grandfather lives. Jack and I split the surveillance duties, only problem is he isn’t much of a worker and I find myself taking on the entire case. I quickly discover there is another woman. I haven’t found her name, yet, but I have figured out where she works. I need proof - preferably photos of the two in some clandestine encounter. Only then can I consider the case a success and possibly move out of the accounting department and into a real private investigator’s role with the company.
There’s also a small detail about a missing woman. In one of my finer moments, I created another alternate job description, journalist. Now, getting close to Ray under the guise of working on the story of a woman gone missing two years ago, has created some suspicions. Not the least is the cops, who’ve been questioning Jack about his relationship with me, the journalist.
Shakespeare comes to mind. Something about a web and deceit. And I may be tangled in more than my share of silky thread.

Last clue was 'Chewing Over' (10 letters) and the answer was 'Reflecting' - I know, bad. Good luck this week - remember to leave your guess in the comment section. Enjoy :)

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Part 17 ~ Washington could not tell any (4 Letters) ~

I was hoping Ray was having a normal morning since I was at my desk shuffling the pile of paperwork that had grown by reams and trying to get some answers to important questions. I planned to use the company’s weight to get a read on the mystery woman’s license plate. And re-establish myself in my real role at the agency. After Hot Dick’s suggestion that I would be without a job, I needed to prove my worth. I couldn’t lose this job. Could. Not.

I rubbed my temples, the headache I had nursed since waking pounding in both frontal lobes. What a mess I had created! First with my fake business card in order to please Gramps and then thinking I could work two jobs in order to finally play private eye. Not to mention almost a week on the case and I didn’t have any proof of Ray Dixon’s infidelity other than a gut feeling that he wasn’t cheating on Carol.

The computer beeped at me. I lifted my head to see that the car driven by the mystery woman was licensed to the Department of Mental Health. Dead end! Charlie’s Angels never ran into this kind of problem when they were solving crime. Everything just dropped in their laps.

And if it didn’t?

I straightened my shoulders. They got creative.

I spent a half an hour on the computer then I closed my office door, pulled out my cell phone and channelled Sabrina Duncan, my favorite Angel.

"Hello. I’m not sure whom I should be talking to, but yesterday a young lady was at the Institution on Glenam."

I scribbled in my notebook as the receptionist supplied the name of the Home.

"Yes, that’s the one. I’ve seen her there before on many occasions, I live just down the street, so I thought she might work for you. I have the plate number for her car."

I rattled off the number and was promptly put on hold. Not sure if that was a good thing or not. I tapped my pencil against the desk and tried to think of another way I could get mystery woman’s name without stalking her and, when given the opportunity, snatch her purse.
"Still here."

The question I had dreaded. Hopefully Mental Health had as much paperwork as I did and wouldn’t bother spending time checking the validity of my answer. "Francis Lewis, but everyone calls me Franny."

Who couldn’t be nice to a woman named Franny? The receptionist gave me the information I was looking for and offered to transfer me to her voicemail as she was out of the office. But I had pies in the oven and the beeper had just gone off, not to mention the fact I wasn’t very comfortable with modern technology and would rather talk to a person than a machine. We ended out chat with a quick discussion about which pie is better, apple or cherry.

I flipped my phone closed and raised my arms in the air.
"Apple, hands down and hallelujah!"
"Mickey?"

Crap on a stick! I hadn’t even heard the office door opening let alone Evan entering my sunless office. I lowered my arms and dropped my cell phone into my purse. "Um, yes. Evan! Good morning." How long had he been standing there?

"I prefer cherry. Was that a client?"

"No." I dropped my gaze, scanned my paper-decorated desk. "My contact at the electrical company. I haven’t got our monthly statement yet and wanted to know if it had been mailed out. Just trying to get organized after those couple of days off."

"You’re feeling better?"

"Much. Thanks." Then I remembered my surveillance coming up that afternoon. "But I have a doctor’s appointment this afternoon."

"That’s fine. Have you seen Jack this morning?"

My question would be ‘do we see Jack any morning’, but I seamed my lips shut and shook my head.

"Mickey, you’re wanted on line 2." Brenda’s voice came over the office intercom.

There was no way I was picking it up while Evan stood in that doorway, I was already unsure of how much he had heard of the last call. "Anything else?"

"No. Thanks." He left, closing the door behind him.

My shoulders slumped. Lie heaped on lie was beginning to wear me down. I picked up the phone just as Brenda repaged me. "Mickey Spencer, how may I help you?"

"Mickey? This is Gertrude Schnider."

"Gert. How are you?"

"Fine, thank you. I thought you might want to know your mystery woman’s back at The Home. Just pulled in about 5 minutes ago."

Copyright: Janet S. Corcoran 2010
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So, it's been a while, People of Blogland, tell me what you've been up to with your writing. Any news to share? Snippets to post - feel free in the comment section. And what's everyone reading - anything wonderful, something dreadful? Ooh, we need to do a beach read post!

FYI - I'm over on The Prairies having a Motivational Party - 80's style. Come on over - and don't forget to bring your big hair and your shoulder pads. I'll be the one in the corner doing that 80's chicken-like dancing: shoulders going one way, arms the other, head bobbing from side to side. Ah, good times :)

Thursday, July 8, 2010

What I Did on Canada Day - a Photographic Essay...

Remember those essays you had to write in school? What I did on my summer vacation? What I'm going to do on my summer vacation? I hated them - usually lied in them (hey, I had a very active imagination - and my real life was kind of boring). As a teacher, I never made my kids write those kind of essays (but I would have them jot down ideas so if they were ever stuck in their journal writing or story writing, they had an "Idea Bank" they could withdraw from).

Anyway - last Thursday, Canada Day, I told you we spent a wonderful evening at friends who have a boat house at the mouth of the LaHave River. The view is straight upriver - straight west - and we had an amazing sunset. As always - you know me and formatting - be patient with me. Remember, clicking on the picture makes it bigger on your screen. And if Stina is reading - I'm not the photograper you are, but the PhD (Push here, Dummy) Camera did pretty good capturing the stunning view!


Ritcey Cove in Riverport, Nova Scotia - fireworks took place at the bridge.









The Gang - all of us gathered for wine, sunset and fireworks. That's the boathouse - jealous, I am!!








The Husband!









Looking up river toward Bridgewater, Nova Scotia - the sun beginning to set.
















Believe me when I say the pictures don't do it justice. It was amazing!!
So, People of Blogland - are you sunset people or sunrise people?

Wednesday, July 7, 2010

Inspiration - Kick Start...

Here we are on Inspirational Wednesday and I need a good, swift kick in the motivational department! I'm struggling - to keep going, to not give up, to find that excitement that seems to be just beyond my reach. I blame the weather (blame - wait until you see my last quote), I blame the drudgery of another rewrite, I blame the time I just don't seem to have. All of these quotes address those issues...excuse me while I bend over for my kick!!

Eighty percent of success is showing up. ~ Woody Allen (Kick: I need to show up!)

The man who can drive himself further once the effort gets painful is the man who will win. ~ Roger Bannister (Kick: Just Do It!)

Every worthwhile accomplishment, big or little, has its stages of drudgery and triumph; a beginning, a struggle and a victory. ~ Mahatma Gandhi (Kick: Drudgery leads to triumph!)

Let me tell you something you already know. The world ain't all sunshine and rainbows. It is a very mean and nasty place and it will beat you to your knees and keep you there permanently if you let it. You, me, or nobody is gonna hit as hard as life. But it ain't how hard you hit; it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward. How much you can take, and keep moving forward. That's how winning is done. Now, if you know what you're worth, then go out and get what you're worth. But you gotta be willing to take the hit, and not pointing fingers saying you ain't where you are because of him, or her, or anybody. Cowards do that and that ain't you. You're better than that! ~ From 'Rocky Balboa' (Kick: Get off your knees, stop making excuses, suck it up!)

How are you, People of Blogland? Are you in a good place or do you need some motivational kicking? How many of you right now are saying "Adrian! Adrian!" in a really bad Rocky imitation (I am)?


Tuesday, July 6, 2010

A Story for the Telling (Part 2)...

(Part One can be found at yesterday's post)

The Master Storyteller nodded his head. "You have plot, characterization, and your craft has improved."

The little girl chewed her lip. She wanted to pump her fist in the air, but restrained herself in front of the Master Storyteller. She was sure he could see her heart hammering in her chest.
He drummed his fingers once more, then pushed the sparkly binder toward her. "But your story lacks voice." And he flicked his wrist in dismissal.

She blinked, aware that she was to retrieve her story and leave the presence of the Master. But she couldn’t move. "Voice?" While she waited for some kind of clue as to what that meant, she racked her brain for knowledge of the concept.

"Voice." And he called for the next appointment.

With her binder once more clasped to her chest, the little girl moved toward the door. She hesitated, but this time the doorman only shrugged his shoulders and offered her a sad smile. At the entrance to the palace, she glanced around the courtyard unwilling to leave the city. She had come too far to walk away from her dream and with a renewed resolve decided she was in the perfect place to discover more about ‘voice’.

It was only mid day, too early for all the storytellers to be sharing their tales, but there were still plenty for the little girl to listen to. She stopped at the first fabler and focused on his words and the small crowd gathered around. When he had finished, and the audience had shown their appreciation with a smattering of applause, she stepped forward to ask him about voice.

"You must read extensively. The stories you enjoy the most should be the ones you write. I read every day."

She thanked him and moved further into the city. Another storyteller in the midst of entertaining an even larger crowd drew her attention. His story made her laugh along with the audience and she juggled her binder in order to applaud his efforts when he finished. As before, she approached him once the lingering fans had left.

"Write. Write as much as you can and for other reasons than just to tell your story. My journey here included a stint at limerick poetry and couplets in the Land of Rhyme."

With a heartfelt thanks the little girl continued her quest. So far the storytellers who were good enough to work in the City of Tales had alluded to reading and writing. But she did read and write and obviously that was not enough to give her story the uniqueness the Master Storyteller required.

She passed a few more minstrels as she contemplated her voice. A noise to her left pulled her from her reverie. A tremendous group of people was gathered around what the little girl could only surmise to be a fabulous storyteller. She nudged her way through the crowd until she stood at the front and stared in wonder at the tiniest man she had ever seen. He sat upon an upended apple crate, engaging the audience in a story of epic proportions.

By the time he had spun his tale, she and the crowd behind her were entranced. Moments passed in complete silence until the tiny man stood up and bowed his head, breaking the spell and inciting a rousing cheer, thunderous applause, and loud whistles of appreciation. While the crowd slowly dispersed, many going up to the storyteller and offering personal thanks, the little girl took the time to dry her eyes. The beautiful words had moved her to tears.

She waited until the stragglers had left and asked the storyteller about voice, sharing what she had learned from the others. He gestured toward her binder and asked if she had written a story. She said she had and waited to hear his wise words on finding her voice. She was surprised when he asked another question.

"But is it a story for the telling? Have you told your story aloud?"

Of course she had read her story aloud finding the practice helped in perfecting her craft.

"Not the words on paper. Not the way you have written them. Have you read your story from your heart?"

"No."

He gestured for her to sit, then he paced before her. "Do not dismiss what the others have told you for reading and writing are very important in learning who you are as a storyteller. But how you tell a story, from your heart, is the key to defining your voice. Anyone can put words upon paper, but each of us has a heart that beats differently. Speaking your story bypasses the mechanics and lets your uniqueness as a storyteller shine through."

Her mind whirled at the storyteller’s insight. Finally she understood why the Master Storyteller dismissed her. She had a story, but it lacked heart. No, it lacked her heart. She jumped up from her seat and thanked the tiny man profusely. He nodded his head and wished her luck.

As she ran through the city, her heart hammering in her chest, she passed the doorman on his way home. He called to her, "Where are you going?"

She slowed only enough to shout back at him over her shoulder, "I must go home and get to work."

"Will you return?"

"Oh, yes. And this time with a story for the telling."

The End

OMG - I just finished rereading this and had an 'aha' moment! From my own writing I find the advice I've been looking for - discovering your voice, speaking from the heart, your style! I must rush home...wait, I'm at home! I need to retell Lady Bells, not rewrite Lady Bells!

And, of course, you know this is not the last you'll hear from me about voice.

So, People of Blogland, what say you about voice? Have you had an 'aha' moment recently with regards to voice? Do you think it's as important as everyone leads you to believe?

Monday, July 5, 2010

A Story for the Telling...


Once upon a time, in a land not so far away, lived a little girl who desperately wanted to be a storyteller. Every day she sat at her desk writing the story of her heart. She worked hard at creating a plot that made sense, a mystery the hero would want to keep secret and that would intrigue the heroine. She created secondary characters – a villain to further plague the beautiful heroine and a friend who knew the hero's secret, but had promised to take the truth to his grave. And, of course, she included lots of romance.

The day she finished her story excitement sizzled through her from the tips of her toes to the ends of her fine, golden hair. She clapped her hands and gathered up the sheaves of paper as the printer spit them out. Finding her prettiest binder, she inserted the manuscript and smoothed the title page lovingly pleased with the way her name looked in the position of author. With the masterpiece tucked under her arm, she left her little cottage at the edge of the woods and walked into the City of Tales (not to be confused with the Tale of Two Cities across the River Literature).

She was in luck, for the Master Storyteller was in his palace and taking visitors. She handed the doorman the binder and sat in the chairs with the other wannabe writers. It was a long day; fortunately, she had put her small notebook in her jacket pocket and spent the time scribbling ideas for her second story.

Finally, she was called forward. A smile so wide at the prospect of becoming a storyteller and moving to the City of Tales actually hurt her cheeks, but she didn't care. She sat across from the man all writers revered.

The pretty binder landed with a thud on the desk producing a puff of dust that lingered in the air. The little girl opened the cover, her smile disappearing at the sight of all the red editing marks scrawled over her masterpiece. She blinked back the tears of hurt and looked up at the Master.

"Point of View." And he lifted his arm in dismissal.

The little girl gathered up her binder noticing the dust motes still sparkling in the late afternoon sunlight spilling through the grand window of the office. They had lasted longer than her entire discussion with the Master.

The doorman must have noticed her chagrin for he stopped her before she could leave. "You must come back."

The binder jabbed into the flesh of her stomach, a painful reminder of her pitiful attempt. "He doesn't like it."

"Most are told to leave and never return. You are one of the lucky ones. Fix the point of view issues and return. All is not lost."

His words fought for space amongst the displeasure and sadness the Master's dismissal had created. She clutched the binder tightly to her chest.

For an entire week, the little girl studied point of view and implemented all she had learned. She could see why the master had rejected her work. Her point of view was all over the place with every character giving his perspective in every scene. The term ‘head-hopping’ certainly applied to her work. Carefully, she studied each scene and decided which character had the most to lose, then rewrote in that character’s point of view. At the end of the process, she had renewed faith in her story.

But once again, after waiting almost the entire day for the Master Storyteller to pass judgement, she was disappointed. This time her manuscript had been edited in blue and she expected to be told to go home and never return.

Instead, the divine Orator said, "Passive language," and pointed to the door.

The doorman winked. "I’ll see you next week."

The little girl still felt sorry for herself, but her heart was not as sad as the previous week. She rushed home to begin her rewrite. She studied each sentence and abolished all passive verbs. Her writing became tighter, more concise. ‘Action’ was her new mantra and her characterization became stronger due to her diligence. The week passed quickly and soon it was time to return to the City of Tales.

The palace was busier than usual when she handed the doorman her binder. "Is it a special day today?"

He added her work to the teetering pile of manuscripts already waiting the Master Storyteller’s perusal. "The wannabe story tellers come in waves. We get a big rush just after the Festival of Folklore, and another one after the summer Celebration of Muse. Today’s glut, however, is directly related to the poor economy in the Land of Work."

"Oh." The little girl had no idea so many others wanted to become storytellers, too. She nodded her thanks to the doorman and went to sit with the others anxious to hear news of their storytelling abilities.

But she did not have to wait long and was called to the Master Storyteller’s office well ahead of the others that had been there longer than she. She straightened her skirt and held her head high. She had worked hard and knew that her story was better. This time she was prepared for whatever the Master told her for his wise words had improved her storytelling abilities.

The binder did not get tossed upon the desk. Instead the Master Storyteller drummed his fingers on the sparkly cover. The little girl swallowed. Hard. She clasped her hands in her lap and crossed her fingers. Her heart raced in anticipation. Cliché or not, time stood still as she awaited the verdict.

To be continued…

So, People of Blogland, what say you on passive language and point of view? Does rewriting with an eye to these elements make your story stronger? The little girl is very persistent, do you think persistence pays? What do you think the Master Storyteller will say to the little girl?


(First 'published' in June of 2009 on Prairie Chicks Write Romance)